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martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21
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Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2010-07-01 07:00 PM



The "Czech"

Oh, and things just got interesting

a jealous boyfriend
she says
for the first time in years

he wants to meet me
says...
he appreciates me
that we have fun


and oh things just got more interesting
as she patted me on the shoulder
with the copy of the book I gave her

"The Postman Always Rings Twice"

and she doesn't know whats in store for her
yet
but, I wish I could see the look on her face when she turns those pages
when her eyes caress those words
when her pupils dilate
and her mouth opens
provocatively

wondering...
what ideas I've put into her head
something she has already spoken of
thought, said, perhaps in jest, no, in anger

The "Greek"
ne, ne, ne
The "Czech"

she always seems to have something
to take off
in front of me

she looks away
letting my eyes play
all over her bare shoulders
and more...

as I watched her walk away
as I watched her hips sway
looking over her shoulder to give me a wave

Yes, my dear, I was watching you

© Copyright 2010 Kenneth Bradley Smith - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2010-07-07 07:12 PM


Enjoyed...James
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2010-07-08 08:54 AM


yes, you paint the images well and one can easily see you watching her walk away...

nicely done...

Eldest
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since 2010-06-15
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3 posted 2010-07-08 12:17 PM


and she is watching you watch her, as well
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
4 posted 2010-07-09 10:28 AM


A "nice" double here with While you were sleeping. Well-composed, and I wish the writer the best.

Being objectified and put down is no fun, especially when one has done nothing wrong to deserve mistreatment.

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