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katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

0 posted 2010-07-01 02:53 AM


Forrest and Jenny

Oh Forrest,
Your Jenny is near
Come here, come here,
There's nothing to fear
Your love for me is clear.

Oh Forrest,
It's just you and me
I'll let you see
My skin is soft as can be
What? You have to pee!

Oh Forrest,
Don't be shy
Say that you want to try
No, it won't hurt, I won't cry
It's what people do, no lie!

Oh Forrest,
Breathe, you're turning blue!
It's ok, it's ok, it's true
Just between me and you
Your Jenny loves you too!


© Copyright 2010 Karen A . Blackburn - All Rights Reserved
Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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Osaka, Japan
1 posted 2010-07-01 05:47 AM


A feeling of love and the first experience that results from it is wonderfully captured in this piece.
bel1e
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2 posted 2010-07-01 07:32 AM


very well composed !

lyrical and emotive~~~


~~enjoyed

         

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3 posted 2010-07-01 02:23 PM


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zeusthamghty
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4 posted 2010-07-01 04:28 PM


i enjoyed that. very nice

katahdin
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
5 posted 2010-07-05 07:42 PM


Thank you everyone who read my poem. It's inspired by the movie but also because my boyfriend calls me "His Jenny".
Kat >^..^<

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6 posted 2010-08-19 01:17 AM



delightful!

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