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Open Poetry #46

Light of Day

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2010-06-30 03:00 PM

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In mid afternoon
Beyond the end
Of time

Without point
Of reference
No place
In memory
Common history
Between nothing
Absence and non

Before next breath
After the last
In a stillness
Opened thru accident
A curtain drawn

Beside aside
All I thought
Was so consequent

Out of nowhere
Someone—
Calling my name

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crosscountry83
Member

since 2009-07-30

Posts 345

1 posted 2010-06-30 10:54 PM

"Out of nowhere
Someone—
Calling my name"

My favorite lines.. they make me wonder who the "someone" is. The whole poem has a unique tone, thanks for posting this. -Rileigh

Eterne
Member

since 2010-07-21

Posts 75
Quebec, Canada

2 posted 2010-07-21 01:55 AM

Surprise encounter? I like your poem a lot!

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