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bel1e
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0 posted 2010-06-30 01:58 PM


I am a good prisoner,
tiny blue pinafores atwirl upon my sash,
I am a pinwheel in a tin mirror, tin me,
alas, all my tantrums are to no avail,

for nothing comes
to redeem or fetch me, now,
I am November in your body,
asleep with fists clenched in prayer,

killjoys cat-o-nine tails
at my back, and grinning,
caricatures of dreams I climb into
and bruise so easily,

through my brooding blue dress,
my womb fills with possums...

...drowning,

~ Alice

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~from Flower Song, a collection of Epistolery Poems



          

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dollmaker
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mass dorchester
1 posted 2010-06-30 02:22 PM


DARK BUT GOOD
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2010-06-30 02:58 PM


am November in your body,
asleep with fists clenched in prayer,


love that line...but love the poems you share in total..
always a moving experience ma'am..to read you

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2010-06-30 03:28 PM


possums are a majesty of design..but battery operated I think...your storage of them in this makes me recognize your soul showing..enjoyed it babybel1e
bel1e
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4 posted 2010-06-30 07:05 PM


dollmaker,

thanks so much for checking this out ~

         

bel1e
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5 posted 2010-06-30 07:06 PM


thanks, Chief~~~


xoxoxoxox

         

bel1e
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6 posted 2010-06-30 07:07 PM


dark~~~

your battery operated reference made me laugh  

Thanks for dropping in to read~

<3

         

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