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therightside
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since 2009-12-09
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0 posted 2010-06-30 08:40 AM


I ache, wanting not to miss you
with every part of my soul
please, I beg of you
just let me let you go

You echo in my silence
you're ringing in my ear
please whisper those 3 words to me
'let me go', I need to hear

You cut so deep into my heart
it was there you left your soul
though time may heal the wound
the scar won't fade, you just won't go

Bliss inside such pain
it's a complicated fear
to let someone new get near
to love again, the way we did

The scar that holds your soul
I pick at it just to feel
because as much as I want to let you go

(have 2 options for the last line - would love feedback)

saying goodbye is my greatest fear

or

saying goodbye makes it all too real


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