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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-06-30 07:23 AM



we were sometimes like water together there
on the dunes on those malibu afternoons
barefooting our jeans stride for stride
pretending we were just one person

and later over wine at the gladstone
we would let our lips touch sometimes
not to kiss into each other's need
but more to just acknowledge the wanting

those wood floors were always warm after
when we would dance to our own special music
and your bungalow would seem to whisper
about how we abused your law books intentions

and left them scattered like our clothing
over tables and occasional chair debris
litering those lonely places with laughter
healing the wounds you carried out from boston

I still see your smile on that mound of crosses


___________

daark

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bel1e
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1 posted 2010-06-30 07:43 AM


sweet~*~as dark can be  

         

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2010-06-30 08:07 AM


thanks baby bel1e
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2010-06-30 08:21 AM


Like I said yesterday... not everyone can truly look at something and see...
your ending tells me you once again saw and wrote...

always a pleasure to read you sir...

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2010-06-30 03:25 PM


Cpat..thanks amigo..I refer to her as the queen of forest lawn now..
Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
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5 posted 2010-07-01 02:41 AM


it's the ability
to create splendid
time and again,
each immersion
not another, but anew
that makes you
you
and leaves them
with shimmering memories
of your source.


Indigo

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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6 posted 2010-07-01 07:00 AM


ms indi..
and the lady ocean
strumming her hair
with her fingers
as she straddles the highway lines
and watches my leather
slippery when whet..
thanks lady

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