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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-06-29 06:47 PM


Shopping the Marts

Allright I'm confused
and I don't know what to do.
I feel like giving up
and we might be through.
I'm afraid they broke my heart
the way they're changing Wal-Mart.
They made the aisle's wider
and they mixed all the products up,
now I have trouble finding everything,
what the heck is up?
Last night as I was walking
the aisle with my shopping cart
I got the strangest feeling,
I felt like I was in K-Mart.

JamesLee
26June
2010

Perhaps the person who
redesigned Wal-Mart
was a former
K-Mart employee...



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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
1 posted 2010-06-29 07:30 PM


Cute, James. I know the feeling, Just went to Walmart yesterday.
                               Ida

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
2 posted 2010-06-29 09:18 PM


I miss Walmart and I hope that it is not in the state that you described.  Putting that aside, I found this clever and cute.
Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
Posts 274

3 posted 2010-07-01 11:57 PM


This poem reminds me of that saying if it ain't broke, don't fix it.
dollmaker
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mass dorchester
4 posted 2010-07-02 01:10 PM


very cute...i hate change 2.
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5 posted 2010-07-02 02:32 PM


I get you!  They changed the door you go in an out at my favorite market, and if I hit my head on that stupid door one more time I am going to scream!  Security they say, and we are all ready to sue them for injury.  LOL  One door in now and one door out, so much for a door swinging both ways huh?

I sure miss the markets in Hawaii, as a matter of fact, I think it is time to go for a visit.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
6 posted 2010-07-02 10:36 PM


James,

It's best to stay out of those places.

Bobby

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
7 posted 2010-07-04 12:56 PM


Hi James, the same thing happened to me last month, they changed my store...

have a nice day

yann

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
8 posted 2010-07-07 10:23 PM



James it is only a matter of time and within a few more visits you will know

where everything is. Just a bit of patience
Needed.

Lindsay

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