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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 06-28-2010 01:22 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

the walls were quiet, as if somewhat attentive
to learn perhaps the ways of a man and woman
when their eyes touch like lips to mirrors
and then their skin begins to unravel caution

you sipped your whiskey like it was water
to get there more quickly you mentioned
so you would not mind your mind's guidance
but would press your heart over my beginning

we watched the sun on the floor as it danced
entwining with locust limb insatiability
some shadows were suggestive and you grinned
but looked away before my eyes could catch you

your water turned into my kind of miracle wine
and your eyes were soul windows drapelessly open
looking through my looking back through you
then waiting for our next intermission to end

so our childish innocence could be become adultery


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1 posted 06-28-2010 01:43 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

I have always admired your way of weaving the images and thoughts together... well done... as always....

enjoyed Sir.
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2 posted 06-28-2010 01:45 PM       View Profile for Bastet   Email Bastet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bastet

Very impressive. Your work is always original, innovative, daring. I am a fan.
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3 posted 06-28-2010 02:57 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

humble thanks Cpat..

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Bastet, thank you for the wordglance
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4 posted 06-28-2010 04:58 PM       View Profile for bel1e   Email bel1e   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bel1e

your water turned into my kind of miracle wine

WOW~that's nice~*~

         

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 06-28-2010 06:51 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

thanks darkdot...you smile me
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


6 posted 06-29-2010 01:51 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Amazing piece of poetry, my friend. You write with such incredible style, making me smile even as I get word-wrapped.

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7 posted 06-29-2010 07:03 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms ali-san, love the looks of your tooth when you smile..never seen one engraved like that before..thanks babe
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8 posted 01-07-2011 03:31 PM       View Profile for faithmairee   Email faithmairee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit faithmairee's Home Page   View IP for faithmairee

unique and finely penned...your style is so smooth...i'm listening to johnny adams sing as i write this...i love your writing as i love this man's voice for it's penetrating ways....i've probably said too much but what i have said is sincere, dark stranger...

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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9 posted 01-07-2011 03:33 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms faith....you bless me with your comments..I enjoy you stating what you feel
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