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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2010-06-23 03:37 PM





Eescravo dos Sinos
The name stayed upon my palate tasting salty
As I remembered the sweat and taste of it
And her upon my tongue

The torn half chart in my hand
I laid it upon clean white sheet and began
To extend the lines of map not there
From the half that was
In parts I knew….there would have to be monsters
As in days before when the lands
Now not mapped were shown

There is an art to cartography they say
A science too, but the act of adding hues
And shades to the margins of land or sea
One paints with a touch of blush
Or a shade of blue
Some places shallower than others
Just like incarnations tend to be

“My good fellow” he said
“I see you are hard at trying to dream”
and laughed not unkindly but in a bemused sort of way

I did not look up but continued on
Thinking of the hues I might paint the memories of her
And how I might map the contours
With translations of eye and hand
Coordinating the sketch that I would draw
With fingertips on skin

“The sound of silver bells”
he whispered as I closed my eyes
“I always preferred the sound of coins”
he continued
“yet, I know where you are”

I turned and he reached inside his coat
Handing me a sinew knotted with
A tiny silver bell

“to remember her” he said
“I knew you both back then
And know the parting of your ways
Was to both
         The very end”

I trembled as I took it in my hand
And felt her close to me
A tear I cried unconsciously found path
Down my cheek

“let me” he said  as he wiped it off
with a deep cold finger


“keep looking my good man” he said
and left as a shadow leaves in the sun
a slow fade of once was there
and then when gone
you still see the outline of where it was

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2010-06-23 03:52 PM


Cpat..does hitting "print screen" while in yahoo maps count as cartographing? (grin) I go places blindly quite often and then look up maps after I return to see how my journey looked...or other ways to get there.   Enjoyed it!
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2010-06-23 04:54 PM


now this
this is what i have missed !!!

bel1e
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3 posted 2010-06-23 05:20 PM


omg~

         

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2010-06-23 06:51 PM


This is far better than Googling Earth...

You haven't lost your touch in knowing
how to bring salt to a woman's eye...

and a heavy sigh to follow.

Did I mention, welcome home? Yeah, I know I
did...and you know I did...

but Thank God you did.


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