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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
Bushes outside the window, Raindrops on the leaves, beaded like silver pearls. How I wish I could freeze this moment and save it on my wall. Tiny white flowers, decked with mini-drops, waiting for the bees to come out. Beauty that we could never create leaves me with a painful longing to be able to recreate it |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Beauty that even Kodak can't reproduce...very descriptive write dear lady. Even us wicked old guys can visualize your observations. LOL |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice.... great visuals here along with the realization that there are some things..we just can't create... enjoyed! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
The best pictures ever are the ones stored in our mind. Lovely Eldest. Richard xx |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Maybe words can never totally recreate any human experience but you have come close with this poem. |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
what a lovely portrait~ |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Beautiful reminder that we all must stop and smell the roses, so to speak. lol And that beauty and beautiful moments should be savored and appreciated. |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Nice. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
your words are important and delicious, for sure we can't recreate beauty of the nature and we have to respect the earth, we are her guest for life...Thanks for the beautiful poem. yann |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Tiny white flowers, decked with mini-drops, waiting for the bees to come out. Beauty that we could never create leaves me with a painful longing to be able to recreate it You have painted a vivid word picture here dear Lady, a joy to read. God bless. Lindsay |
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Kethry D Member
since 2010-04-12
Posts 64Australia |
How well the image is re-created in your words. A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
The moments between rain and sun are indeed special. |
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ramisf Member
since 2007-05-17
Posts 93 |
"Beauty that we could never create leaves me with a painful longing to be able to recreate it" we create what we want and we do what we please.. enjoyed |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
You have the eye of an artist and the soul of a poet, a very unusual combination. Great work. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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