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Namyh
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0 posted 2010-06-22 08:18 PM



Call of the Moment

When strong is the call, however bleak the moment,
a leader within rises as the one lone exponent
to champion Life, both of limb and throne,
while Doom looms in darkness to gnaw on fallen bones.

No time for Fear or those common day distractions
that do weigh us down. Only time for action !
No time for pondering or asking why.
The deed must be done and it’s yours to do or die !

What leaps from the shadows into the hearts of Man
that's courageous to protect and defiant to defend ?
It lunges out a pit dug from trembling Despair
where sins of fractured failures whisper doubts into your ear.

It charges with a sword to cleave those Fears made real
from your mind, now that's fearful, needing fearless nerves of steel
to clench the fists and muscle, to make the backbone steady,
to plant the feet and grit the teeth and make the leader ready,

It leaps from your heights with Conviction held in hand
to dive into your pulsing heart embattled to take a stand.
Any cracks in human spirit will bathe in its Faith that seals
and Courage won't leak from cowards on the open battlefields.

Resist what resists in you, for it undermines your gain.
Make it kneel vanquished at your thrones of fleeting Fame
and you will reign empowered to make your Soul and Mind
defeat all Dooms of darkness when the moment calls next time.

Namyh

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Margherita
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1 posted 2010-06-23 09:35 AM


quote:
Resist what resists in you, for it undermines your gain.
Make it kneel vanquished at your thrones of fleeting Fame
and you will reign empowered to make your Soul and Mind
defeat all Dooms of darkness when the moment calls next time


So well said and so profound, dear Namyh. Deserves more than one read really.

Love
M

Eldest
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2 posted 2010-06-23 09:39 AM


Very well said.  There are times when you don't know where the strength or the words come from, they are just there in times of crisis.
Earl Brinkman
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3 posted 2010-06-24 04:48 AM


This poem`s strength lies in the courage that it can give to others.  We must resist the dark shadows that can creep into our souls.  Resist!
LindsayP
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4 posted 2010-06-25 10:45 PM



You wrote it well my friend, enjoyed

Lindsay

Kethry D
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5 posted 2010-06-26 10:01 PM


Very well written with a powerful message.

A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof.

Rene Char

ramisf
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6 posted 2010-06-27 04:36 AM


me like ... impressive... enjoyed
Namyh
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7 posted 2010-06-28 07:19 AM


Margherita – With a few improvements, I think it came out better this time. So very glad you found it still profound and worthy of many reads. You rock Margherita. Namyh
Namyh
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8 posted 2010-06-28 07:21 AM


Eldest – I guess if the strengths or words arise in times of crisis, then they must have been waiting there all the time. Whoa! There’s a revelation that comes with hope. Thanks for stopping in. Hope it helped. Your enjoyment did. Namyh
Namyh
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9 posted 2010-06-28 07:22 AM


Earl – Isn’t it Ironic that we often need to overcome the dark shadows to gain strengths of character. Who set it up that way? Stop by anytime Earl for a cup of Courage and a bowl of Resist!. We’ll keep the lights on. Thanks for enjoying. Namyh
Namyh
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10 posted 2010-06-28 07:23 AM


Lindsay – I wrote it for those of us who need to hear that we are stronger than we think and not as weak as some say. I’m enjoying your enjoyment. Namyh
Namyh
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11 posted 2010-06-28 07:25 AM


KethryD – So very glad we poets can get our messages thru with just a few words and someone hears like you. No more email for me! LOL.Thanks KethryD. Namyh
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12 posted 2010-06-28 07:26 AM


ramisf – “me like…impressive….enjoyed” – That kinda says it all ramisf. What scribbler of words could ask for more. Thankee...lots!. Namyh
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