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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-06-22 03:48 PM

woman of the worldly willows glancing
do you still sip those whiskey songs down
and press your belly to their moan music

do you remember how my hands fit your sins
and made you whisper vulgar words slowly
as if the sensations of their syllables soothed

or stirred the heathen need of hearing voices
the ones less proper than ladylike authorized
but the ones that were needed there more often

to keep the edges of your armor well oiled mostly
and sometimes just wet enough to swim your sighs
into the lovely concussions you could strum

while straddling highway lines with your eye ways

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daark

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2010-06-22 03:55 PM

Not a lot I can say..I just read, admire the use of word and phrase..enjoy the read...
no one does it quite like you Sir...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2010-06-22 03:58 PM

humblemumbled thanx Cpat..I appreciate your reviews

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-06-23 11:08 AM

Oh, my, how you make the words dance! A wild, passionate dance that accelerates the heartbeat.

Love,
M

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2010-06-23 11:48 AM

ms mar, thank you sweet lady friend

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2010-06-23 02:23 PM

DS- I could dance to this.

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (06-23-2010 03:45 PM).]

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2010-06-23 03:15 PM

thanks ms, I appreciate the read

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2010-06-23 07:05 PM

Lots and lots of alliteration here...

always well done, sunny side up...light
toast and butter salty...

and of course there are the willows...
I have written of willows, but their flow
is always different from here
to there.

Oh yeah...I like the poem, too!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2010-06-24 06:05 AM

ms sun...I always enjoy the flavor of your replies...how they fit my mind lips like a sip of lady whiskey...thanks babe

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

9 posted 2010-06-26 07:39 AM

You have given a whole new definition to syllables! As if they could sooth! You are the master of the line! Where do these lines come from?

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2010-06-26 08:51 AM

EB....they are the sounds (I imagine) of the highway under gypsy wheels....the sounds of a woman sky in mornings as she wear only the dawn..the sounds of an ocean mating some cove with fervent undulations..thanks amigo

Kethry D
Member

since 2010-04-12

Posts 64
Australia

11 posted 2010-06-26 09:39 PM

Daark and not a little disturbing, but compelling none the less.

A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof.

Rene Char

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

12 posted 2010-06-26 10:10 PM

I like this one....

Nice to see you

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

13 posted 2010-06-27 07:20 AM

Kethry, it is a pleasure to disturb you (grin) it was quite light really or the highway and the lady are/were, thanks

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hey zin...good to see you too, thanks for the read

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