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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2010-06-22 11:44 AM


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It is summer
The trees are green

Since that day
I have been wandering
Wending in the memory
Of the garden your being
Suddenly composed

Bemused among
Those beautiful flowers
Whose sensual fragrances
Fill the air with thoughts
And dreams

Who would have imagined
What signs or symbols
Could have warned me before

It is summer
The trees are green


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2010-06-22 12:00 PM


Nothing brings back memories more intensely than fragrances.

Most beautiful.

M

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2010-06-22 06:52 PM


the middle of this is especially fine!:

"Bemused among
  Those beautiful flowers
  Whose sensual fragrances
  Fill the air with thoughts
  And dreams"

easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
3 posted 2010-06-23 08:32 AM


We dream, and yet there is so often no warning of misfortune. Everything looks the same, and yet there is time. The green, or greens, can be beautiful, of course.

A good and thought-provoking write, and a good read, thank you.

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