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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 You leave me here, stranded, distant, alone, without rescue, my heart sinks to ocean depths, Foamy waves of memory splash, lashing out against stone cliffs, Thunderous rains of pain pour down, Cold, wet, hungry, alone, not one ship in sight do I see, no light shinning in this darkness, Your heart light always carried me, home to love unconditional, dreams, hopes, love unafraid, protected, Light your lantern and lead me home. [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-22-2010 06:15 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Poignant, dear ARH. Love, Margherita |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice interplay between the words and the image... the story told, one of waiting and of hope... very nicely done ma'am. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
never stranded if we have love and heart lights  beauty in this write |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
This is so sad.. it fits the image well.. the pic is very dreamy, it reminds me of a Maxfield Parrish..one of my fave artists ~Amaryllis |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Totally in love with the picture. And the words are equally special. Hoping the light comes on soon. Passion like this shouldn't be left out in the dark. Richard xx |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
may the fine, bright light of Romanticism lead us all home! excellent choice of leading image! |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
The speaker seems abandoned but still holds out an unrealistic hope for salvation. How sad! Nice writing here with a terrific picture. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This is beautiful, and beatuifully sad. I hope your light returns. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
my eyes go to the swan, as if she were the writer and the woman was the witness to her words..enjoyed it ms |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
what a lovely plea~~~ |
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Eldest Member
since 2010-06-15
Posts 177Alabama |
beautiful words and a beautiful picture |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...your writings would make a fine book...one to be treasured...James |
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