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Edder
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0 posted 2010-06-18 06:46 PM



i find myself
alive in a may wood
neath a tender canopy
of late spring
awash in the verdant
glow of a leaf strained sun
tasting the pouty fruit
of lips ripe with the passion
of a love too long denied
i know the supple flesh shadowed
in the cascade of strawberry tendrils
that fall upon your shoulders
and spill into my dreams
like the salty trickle
of want that traces
the line of your neck
and quenches my thirsty tongue


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bel1e
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1 posted 2010-06-18 06:49 PM


mmmmm~ love the tactile and vivid green scents in this~*~*~

      

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2010-06-18 09:38 PM


i am filled with glee
Edder
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3 posted 2010-06-18 11:37 PM


Bel1e- Thank you

Helen- How could I resist?

Edder
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4 posted 2010-06-18 11:37 PM


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