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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Relationships, they're dropping one by one there must be something in the beer something in the water something that rolls over slides over drains down the tongue something in the barley something in the hops something in the Czech fields the elixir, of relationship flops something about this city something that those left behind something breathed in, drank by the many that find no pity in the d r o p s and there, out there somewhere in here we're... floating in the between always strived for, longing for, looking for... some girl making the head twirl something just happened by chance in and out of a relationship 10 years goes by so fast and I I don't know what I want and I look into her eye's there's not much there... I don't. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
10 years goes by so fast and I I don't know what I want and I look into her eye's there's not much there... I don't. like the piece..and like the strong ending you crafted.... enjoyed! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I never tire of your poetry, it is so great to read what you have to say, and how you say it. Always a fan~ Martini Man~ |
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