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Open Poetry #46

Haiku of the Morning

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2010-06-17 06:35 AM

Sunlight slipping in,
But for now I just don’t mind,
As I drink some wine.

Gloom

(Dang! They’re so short I better do another)

East windows greet you
Showing dust dancing in air,
With no song to share.

Gloom

(O.K. but three’s my limit.)

Cats vie for places
In the first warm touch of day,
Turning the temp up.

Gloom

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2010-06-17 06:55 AM

I like the 3rd one best!

M

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

2 posted 2010-06-17 06:57 AM

~this made me smile this morning~

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

3 posted 2010-06-17 07:21 AM

I like the 1st one best!

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2010-06-17 03:37 PM

Thank you all for taking the time to read and respond.

Gloom

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

5 posted 2010-06-17 04:41 PM

I like them all, Gloom. Very well done.
Ida

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since 2010-06-15

Posts 177
Alabama

6 posted 2010-06-17 05:32 PM

I liked the second one, I've sat and watched the dust dancing in the air more than once.

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