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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-06-16 07:22 AM



you were serving whispering mornings mostly
something ladylike in heeling shoes
standing behind the green tables there
lest I noticed your legs were lovely
and mentioned something blushable again

the smudgemongers always arrived earlier
to make our clouds into someone else's
shapes I didn't recognize but wanted to
so I could show them to you as photos
taken at planned random from a wallet sky

and folded into a brailman's calligraphy
not with rhyme cologne, but sandalwood worldly
from barefoot dreaming at windowed dawns
where agendas were our menus in memory colors
and nothing else on was considered black tie

lest I mentioned something blushable again


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daark


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bel1e
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1 posted 2010-06-16 08:05 AM


your flair for hidden images woven into the fabric of your word patterns has always intrigued me~~

niiice, Darkiee


      

passing shadows
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2 posted 2010-06-16 10:45 AM


I'm wondering, now after all these years, if you can make me blush anymore

Amaryllis
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3 posted 2010-06-16 10:57 AM


A class act, as usual, Dark!     
Best to ya~Amaryllis

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2010-06-16 11:54 AM


dark daughter...thank you babe

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ms dixie..perhaps a kiss on the wrist would make you blush into a grin?  thanks lady

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amary' thank you for the eye touch

Sunshine
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5 posted 2010-06-16 07:37 PM


Sometimes, certain phrases sing...

~*~

the smudgemongers always arrived earlier
to make our clouds into someone else's
shapes I didn't recognize but wanted to
so I could show them to you as photos
taken at planned random from a wallet sky

and folded into a brailman's calligraphy
not with rhyme cologne, but sandalwood worldly
from barefoot dreaming at windowed dawns

~*~

and these were among them

passing shadows
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6 posted 2010-06-17 01:51 AM


oh dark, a wrist is not for that but I'm sure I could give you a spot



Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2010-06-17 05:50 AM


ms sun, thanks lady friend


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ms dixie...we can start anywhere you wish..thanks lady

BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2010-06-18 12:58 PM


Aren't you something, gotta hand it to you, DS,
you're quite skilled in the art of blushable!

Geez, thanks for the rosey warm fuzzies!!


Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2010-06-18 03:00 PM


babyblue....ah shucks...and yes you are lovely when you blush..
faithmairee
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10 posted 2011-01-07 03:52 PM


i'm enjoying your work so much, this poem being no exception...love your cool style and how your words always seem to touch my soul...

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2011-01-07 03:55 PM


ms faith...you bless me ms...thank you
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