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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 06-16-2010 07:22 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


you were serving whispering mornings mostly
something ladylike in heeling shoes
standing behind the green tables there
lest I noticed your legs were lovely
and mentioned something blushable again

the smudgemongers always arrived earlier
to make our clouds into someone else's
shapes I didn't recognize but wanted to
so I could show them to you as photos
taken at planned random from a wallet sky

and folded into a brailman's calligraphy
not with rhyme cologne, but sandalwood worldly
from barefoot dreaming at windowed dawns
where agendas were our menus in memory colors
and nothing else on was considered black tie

lest I mentioned something blushable again


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bel1e
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1 posted 06-16-2010 08:05 AM       View Profile for bel1e   Email bel1e   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bel1e

your flair for hidden images woven into the fabric of your word patterns has always intrigued me~~

niiice, Darkiee


      

passing shadows
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2 posted 06-16-2010 10:45 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I'm wondering, now after all these years, if you can make me blush anymore
Amaryllis
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3 posted 06-16-2010 10:57 AM       View Profile for Amaryllis   Email Amaryllis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Amaryllis

A class act, as usual, Dark!     
Best to ya~Amaryllis
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 06-16-2010 11:54 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

dark daughter...thank you babe

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ms dixie..perhaps a kiss on the wrist would make you blush into a grin?  thanks lady

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amary' thank you for the eye touch
Sunshine
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5 posted 06-16-2010 07:37 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Sometimes, certain phrases sing...

~*~

the smudgemongers always arrived earlier
to make our clouds into someone else's
shapes I didn't recognize but wanted to
so I could show them to you as photos
taken at planned random from a wallet sky

and folded into a brailman's calligraphy
not with rhyme cologne, but sandalwood worldly
from barefoot dreaming at windowed dawns

~*~

and these were among them
passing shadows
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6 posted 06-17-2010 01:51 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

oh dark, a wrist is not for that but I'm sure I could give you a spot


Dark Stranger
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7 posted 06-17-2010 05:50 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms sun, thanks lady friend


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ms dixie...we can start anywhere you wish..thanks lady
BluesSerenade
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8 posted 06-18-2010 12:58 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Aren't you something, gotta hand it to you, DS,
you're quite skilled in the art of blushable!

Geez, thanks for the rosey warm fuzzies!!

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 06-18-2010 03:00 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

babyblue....ah shucks...and yes you are lovely when you blush..
faithmairee
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10 posted 01-07-2011 03:52 PM       View Profile for faithmairee   Email faithmairee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit faithmairee's Home Page   View IP for faithmairee

i'm enjoying your work so much, this poem being no exception...love your cool style and how your words always seem to touch my soul...

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 01-07-2011 03:55 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms faith...you bless me ms...thank you
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