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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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did you change for the sake of art and lose those vaseline glancing eyes when you leaned sultry on your elbows pretending salads were what you wanted but kept me behind your intentional sway so the interest I paid on your loaning of some sensual femaletational purpose would eventually succumb to my coining of explicit suggestions slowly soliciting and depositing my lechery at your brim where your embarasment of bare shoulders was purchased nearly strapless then loosened lest my intentions were less than inglorious ___________ daark |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
I like the first line, and the use of vaseline for the glinting of sultry eyes is original and suggestive, to say the least. I was almost expecting "joining" instead of "coining", even with the loan reference gone before. "Femaletational" is a good coinage imho, though. Abuse of power |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
easy1..thanks for the read. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, I don't know anyone who titles poems as well as you do. And the rest, well, I am a number #1 fan and groupie on the go girl. Thanks for the share. Ali-san |
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nebulous_nymph Junior Member
since 2008-03-02
Posts 37Inertia |
in-glory in-deed love this! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks babe...I get my titles out of the crackerjack box... ______________ ms nymph..oh thank you namesake.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nope. But I see who could have.  Excellent! |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
her interest in croutons was second only to the leaning lechery of an in-glorius provocateur. Ahh... to be a fly on the wall during that dining experience. Indigo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
but kept me behind your intentional sway so the interest I paid on your loaning of some sensual femaletational purpose would eventually succumb to my coining ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm mostly diggin' the verve!! Groovy, baby~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady _______________ ms indi...weren't you there with your wings pinned or at least left at the door? ___________ babyblue, thanks for touching feels good |
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