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Open Poetry #46
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Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
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0 posted 2010-06-14 04:03 PM


Soft and mellow.
Sweet like jello.
That's how you felt when I held you on the dance floor.

Eyes closed.
As we took our whirl.
Felt like I was in dream world.

Bodies entwined as they played our favorite song.
Sparks that you send.
God I prayed that this slow dance would never end.
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Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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1 posted 2010-06-14 05:11 PM

Very nice
SlowlyFallAway
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since 2008-08-29
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2 posted 2010-06-14 10:35 PM

Short and simple, to the point... Well written. Well meant.
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