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Open Poetry #46

All Luscious

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

0 posted 2010-06-11 02:17 AM

All luscious and sweet.
You've made my life complete.
Like a cherry Tootsie Roll Pop.
Long lasting love whenever we meet.

It seemed as though the stars shone tonight.
Just for you.
It seemed as if raindrops of love.
Fell softly for two lovers true.

Wrapped up in your arms.
All warm and tight.
Everything is right with the world tonight.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2010-06-11 04:37 AM

Thanks for the beautiful words, I love the serenity of the poem.

everything is fine tonight, yes it is because of Love.

have a nice day

yann

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2010-06-11 06:21 AM

What a wonderful state to be in!

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2010-06-11 10:37 PM

Wrapped up in your arms.
All warm and tight.
Everything is right with the world tonight.

Very touching words Lamar
You wrote it well.

Lindsay

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

4 posted 2010-06-12 08:45 AM

The opening stanza of using a tootie roll was clever. A sweet poem indeed.

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