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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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like the seldom salty dog of whiskery with whimpering at friendly doors the heavy dark wood with texture kind like tattoos on old soldiers underground so is the morning in her long grey gown she tiptoes from neptunes bed again as if we were married and I were resentful she is a foolish girl, that lady of dying in her centering of attention to be sure there are enough tears torn from my jesus before I am joined to the stones of mercy to be new knuckles on the devils eye shadow a flappering of new leather over wounds that were but peepholes for nightmares before I was blamed blessed lest another be called some ungodly soup song of sainthood _____ daark (terminal freedom)scribblenote: primary elections in calif..or political enema day...nuff said |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Hiya Dark.. While I confess I`m not savvy to the politics in CA (assuming that was the subject of this piece from your sig?) I do like many of your similes here: `so is the morning in her long grey gown she tiptoes from neptunes bed again` You`re always a fascinating read! Wonderful. . Best~Amaryllis . Oh, and  [This message has been edited by Amaryllis (06-09-2010 02:05 AM).] |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Amary' Thanks for the eyes on my splattering...you bless me with your reads. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I am concerned over the "terminal" of your freedom but otherwise, you are once again a timely source of wise doom... because I see my own door as well. Hugging you for all that you bless us with, and will always be a sun you might shine for. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...long as I have bullets I am free...geeze that really sounds scary..thanks lady |
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