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Richy
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0 posted 2010-06-07 06:34 PM



You Are The Words.

Why does your writing
continue to whisper,
to my eyes?

I feel them in my sleep
as they fall, softly
in colors of tender
and sounds deep,
that only my skin
can taste.

I hold you
in these rainbows of night
so that we don’t
have to be apart,
as my dreams digest
the delicious meals,
that are you.

Brain mists of images
that our sleeping souls
pen together,
with tongues
on the velvet peel,
in the unison
of our flesh.

Loving you,
is exhaling,
and never being able
to catch my breath
again.

As you
are the words to the poems,
I always wanted
to write.

© Copyright 2010 Richy - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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1 posted 2010-06-07 06:48 PM


this invokes
words ALL  women want to say…
I wish this was written about me

and ps...
if you ever want to duet
please write me at my email
as i love your poetry

Mysteria
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2 posted 2010-06-07 07:01 PM


Beautiful!  Now what a dynamic duo you two would make as a duet!
Richy
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3 posted 2010-06-07 07:13 PM



Thank you soo much Mysteria, you are so sweet!

Richard xx


Thanks so much dear Helen, I would love to write with you, I don't see your email up here though... write me okay

Richard xx

Amaryllis
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4 posted 2010-06-08 03:03 AM


Oh Rich you`re such a romantic soul~!  Your poetry is what all women would want to hear   .. you really do write so well~!
.
All best to you, my friend~
Amaryllis

vandana
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5 posted 2010-06-08 11:02 AM


nice
Lamar Cole
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6 posted 2010-06-08 05:32 PM


Romantic poetry at its best.
stargal
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7 posted 2010-06-08 07:05 PM


The best thing in my entire day is coming home and reading this; it’s beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Richy
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8 posted 2010-06-09 07:56 AM



Amaryllis, Vandanna, Lamar, thank you all so much, its always very much appreciated!

Stargal, what a kind thing to say, thank you my friend!

Richard xx

Margherita
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9 posted 2010-06-09 08:22 AM


Dear Richy, you are a treat to read! This is exquisite and yes every woman dreams of such words to be whispered into her ear!

Perfect!

Love,
Margherita

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