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whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
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Coquitlam, BC, Canada

0 posted 2010-06-07 01:08 AM



Faithful Love

In the deepest meaning of who I am in
Inside my ransomed heart‘s thoughts
I love you for who you are
A fragile heart who dares to love
God’s gift to help me be grateful

As we’ve  travelled on this journey
We’ve walked the beaches on the Mayan Riviera
Danced when we didn’t know how
Gave when it hurt to give
We held each other tenderly
To comfort each other, from life’s unfairness


When I went and lost my way
You kept the light on in the window
So I could find my way home
Where I knew that I belonged

You’re a woman of incredible character
That always loves me deeply
and still laughs like a silly school girl
When my jokes catch your funny

You are my  eye witness to my life
And I am the fortunate man
To have wife, a lover and a friend,
Who chose to keep the  faith
...in Gods loving plan for us

© Copyright 2010 Walter Aguilar - All Rights Reserved
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-06-07 06:20 AM


Very sweet, a lovely and easygoing read. You and she are lucky, or perhaps the word is blessed!

Never been to the Mayan Riviera personally, but I have acquaintance of it.

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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Mi now
2 posted 2010-06-07 08:47 AM


Very beautiful
Margherita
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3 posted 2010-06-07 09:08 AM


Dear Walter, this is a most heartfelt, beautiful gift for your wife. There are many touching lines.

Love,
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
4 posted 2010-06-07 11:35 AM


Yo ww,

There's a lot of good thoughts in this poem.

Bobby

whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada
5 posted 2010-06-09 01:20 AM


Thank you for your kind feedback..I gave this poem to her as her Birthday gift all framed and matted this past weekend ....she cried and thanked me for it
LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
6 posted 2010-06-11 11:55 PM



You are my  eye witness to my life
And I am the fortunate man
To have wife, a lover and a friend,
Who chose to keep the  faith
...in Gods loving plan for us

You are indeed a lucky man Walt and

realizing it is a very prudent trait to have
much enjoyed.

Lindsay

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