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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Ages with you * I want to sprinkle you with kisses from when you were born up to now I want you to feel the touch of my soul as it sinks through your every pore deep deep within under your skin. I have this irresistible drive to dance to the tune that springs from your core shooting at high speed through my veins until I am flooded with exuberance ready to lift my feet off the floor. How many lifetimes do we get to live? Countless, as the times in between? Ages with you ... that’s the desire of my heart it’s intrinsic in the nature of love. I want to sprinkle you with kisses, with blossoms, snowflakes and stars spiralling through a whirlwind of joy taking the route to the clouds above where everything just falls into place. Ages with you ... with whispers and glances and sighs reverberating through time and space. * |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
I really feel this beautiful and touching love poem. The second stanza is my favorite, although the whole poem is a symphony. I also love the art work. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh Margherita, this is lovely.. a tender, giddy poem, evocative of new love, in that `Honeymoon` phase. Beautiful!  Love, ~Amaryllis [This message has been edited by Amaryllis (06-06-2010 04:22 PM).] |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are the ultimate romantic, Margherita. Lucky you. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, This poem has a great idea. It works very well. Love Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, my Poet friends, for stopping by and for commenting so kindly! Love, Margherita |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
How many lifetimes do we get to live? Countless, as the times in between? Ages with you ... that’s the desire of my heart it’s intrinsic in the nature of love. This was so beautiful sweet friend. Richard xx |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Feels good...thanks for sharing. |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
To be blessed with an eternity of kisses! That would be bliss. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Richy, James, Andrew and Earl, thank you so much. I enjoyed your kind comments! Love, Margherita |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
I want to sprinkle you with kisses, with blossoms, snowflakes and stars spiralling through a whirlwind of joy taking the route to the clouds above where everything just falls into place. Dear Margherita they are beautiful words from a wonderful lady. love to you. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Lindsay for your loving comment! I am on my way to Switzerland and will be away for a while. Blessings to all. Love, Margherita |
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Father Member
since 2009-12-15
Posts 58Confusion |
The virtue of your romantic style is, as ever, present here. As my youngest daughter would say; You go girl! |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very beautiful and romantic poem. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely, lovely, make me sigh, lovely. A |
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SlowlyFallAway Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 279North Carolina |
Admirable. Enjoyed :-) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
splendid Margherita, you are so beautifully inspired, your poem shines... regards yann |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
We miss you, Margherita!! Hope you are having a wonderful trip!Love~Amaryllis |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - I believe this is the greatest poem I've ever read that you have written. Moving, very moving it is. By the way, I love to dance... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a joy to find your loving replies, dear Poet friends. Thank you from my heart. Will not be around much, getting ready for the "beach-time" with my sweet little grandsons ... Wishing you all a great time. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Lady Margerita...so tender and passionate...beautifully written pleasure. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Have lots of fun, Margherita. xoxoxo Alison |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
aw, this touched the heart |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
dieses war eine erfeuliche gelesene Dame.. cio era una signora colta divertente This was an enjoyable read lady.... (Penso che abbiate avuto scrittura di divertimento esso anche). |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"taking the route to the clouds above where everything just falls into place." wouldn't it be nice! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"taking the route to the clouds above where everything just falls into place." I never seem to get there. ...sorry...I bin drinkin'. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Martie, dear Alison, dear Dixie thank you dear friends for your generous and kind replies Toe, you cracked me up  Deine froehliche Natur ist ein Geschenk!Charly, it's so nice when you stop by and read my stuff. I am a "cloud-person", insofar my motto is "keeping my feet firmly in the air". We all have our own favorite cure ... Everything falls into place up there, because we keep a healthy distance to the worries ... that distance makes everything less threatening. We feel "light" in both ways.Love to all. Margherita |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
my merry nature is a gift? um, sometimes that "gift" is a gag....LOL |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Toe, even if it's a gag it still works just fine ... for your healthy balance and for the healthy balance of those you are in touch with too. Du meine Güte, das tönt ja ganz komisch  Aber es ist wahr! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear friend, oh, how I've missed both you and your poetry! Your passionate, loving nature literally pours from every pore in your soul, heart, and body! I love your poetry ~ and you! Linda  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Linda Angel, oh what a magnificent surprise to find you here again! I am in tears of joy ... what a divine gift you are! I love you too and missed you tremendously! Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maga Margherita la senorita que Bonita! I have missed you oh so much myself, my dear Dolphina!  Smiles across the miles, Linda Lou xo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this sure made me smile! Uplifting piece as you seem to do so well |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Linda Lou, I love you!  Dixie dear, I am glad this brought a smile. Hugs. |
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