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Kethry D
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since 2010-04-12
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Australia

0 posted 2010-06-06 08:11 AM


(To the tune of Green Acres)


Green knickers with a hint of lace
Sooo comfy - see the smile on her face
She loves 'em but she must confess
She bought them for just a dollar at Best and Less

She wears them though they make her sweat
She wore one pair twelve days for a bet
Though holey they're the best you see
They make her feel so lovable and so free

look here
they’re sheer
and worn
not torn

on her wedding night
she’ll fling with delight
green knickers in the air.
28/10/09

A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof.

Rene Char

© Copyright 2010 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
Earl Brinkman
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1 posted 2010-06-06 08:17 AM


I found this delightful especially the naughty last stanza!
Balladeer
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2 posted 2010-06-06 08:52 AM


If she wore them 12 days in a row, no wonder they are green!!!

Great to see you, Keth!

Margherita
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3 posted 2010-06-06 01:11 PM


This is funny, dear Kethry. Thanks for the smiles!


Love,
Margherita

Boshii2
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4 posted 2010-06-06 08:39 PM


Dont , Balladeer
kind regards  from Boshii2

Sunshine
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5 posted 2010-06-06 09:15 PM


Kethry...

cute, delightful, totally new!

Welcome home!


Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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6 posted 2010-06-08 03:29 AM


Lol!  Lotsa cute, funny reads on the boards lately! Thanks for the giggle  
.
~A

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
7 posted 2010-06-12 12:07 PM



I hope you weren't to forward at looking at her nickers Kethry. Its not the sort of

thing that a gentleman would do, or would he. It gave me a grin.

Lindsay

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