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Open Poetry #46
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Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
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0 posted 2010-06-04 09:57 PM


Love, darling, is you.
Your love cascaded down the waterfalls of your heart.
To my thirsty soul.
Your love filled the crevices of my life.
Your love is my lighthouse.
My beacon in the night.
I found home in your heart.
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LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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1 posted 2010-06-04 10:06 PM


A very sweet romantic poem Lamar, enjoyed.

Lindsay
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2010-06-05 10:55 AM

I imagine your soul was glowing through your eyes while you wrote this delightful piece.

Love,
Margherita
Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
3 posted 2010-06-06 08:40 AM

An effective use of associations to create a vivid image of an abstract concept called love.
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