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PrestonThePoet
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since 2007-11-07
Posts 87


0 posted 2010-06-04 04:28 AM


Turn your head away from mine
Love everything you hate about me.
And trust in the faith you don’t have.
Lusting for the ignorance you’ve gotten before.
Making my emotions toys,
Mere building blocks of love;
A metaphor wrapped in irony.
My heart surrounded by agony,
This life filled with inconsistencies.


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Amaryllis
Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
Mi now
1 posted 2010-06-08 03:39 AM


Raw feelings; well-expressed, great write  
~Amaryllis

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2010-06-08 04:00 AM


Enjoyed the read!  Perhaps it's man that's filled with inconsistencies and not life. I was, however, thinking about inconsistency when I wrote

"Here amidst the certainty of life’s amazing grace  
there lives a species known as man
and that species known for fickleness
sways like leaves on trees
in the breeze of inconsistency."

Helen

Helen

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