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Open Poetry #46
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet
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since 2009-07-30
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New Orleans
0 posted 2010-06-02 02:02 AM

Used to the thrill of the evening
The shouting of the excited
The intense passion of the hopeful
And the sorrow of the beaten

Used to the chill in the air
The glow of the lights
How we used to joke
While the girls stared

Wasn't much for the game
But I was for the feeling
So it made me go all the same

The crash of helmets
The stomping of feet
Sunday Nights.
© Copyright 2010 Zachariah Gavia-Peyton - All Rights Reserved
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-06-02 09:57 AM

Good stuff - thanks for adding the final short stanza!  
whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada
2 posted 2010-06-02 09:58 AM

I enjoy going to games too...ww
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