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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2010-06-01 05:03 PM



         


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Universe vibrates

with infinite energy:

pure divine concert


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© Copyright 2010 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Amaryllis
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Mi now
1 posted 2010-06-01 05:57 PM


Ahh.. a divine concert indeed! What a treat to see & read this today.. thanks for sharing it!  I am so fascinated by the cosmos.  =)
~Amaryllis

Andrew Scott
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2 posted 2010-06-01 06:12 PM


The cosmic blender
stars spinning round and round
God's perfect cocktail

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Earl Brinkman
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3 posted 2010-06-01 07:32 PM


I had never thought of the cosmos as a divine concert until now.  Wouldn`t it be wonderful to know some of its secrets?
threadbear
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Indy
4 posted 2010-06-01 08:36 PM


Really really nice
5-7-5 Haiku, Margherita!
All sound is vibrations
rhythms
and God is the universe's tuning fork.
Jeff

[This message has been edited by threadbear (06-02-2010 01:39 AM).]

whisperingwalt
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5 posted 2010-06-01 11:21 PM


Very nice Haiku...complemented by the picture..ww
A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2010-06-02 07:34 AM


Perect picture and poem...I agree with Jeff!
easy1
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7 posted 2010-06-02 10:22 AM


A lovely haiku, and a lovely pic (I believe that is what we call the Andromeda Galaxy, "near" neighbor to the Milky Way).  
Richy
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8 posted 2010-06-02 11:35 AM



I love that Margy, the thought of the whole entirety, vibrating, pulsating, tightening up, and then glowing.

Beautiful my friend!
Richard xx

LngJhnAg
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9 posted 2010-06-02 02:56 PM


Very well done!  However, the image confuses me.  Is it a galaxy or a neuron?  hmmm....  inspiration strikes:

Magnificent sight!
The only active neuron
In Toe's cranium.

Well, that was harsh, there might be some more laying around in there, too.

What?  This is a galaxy?

Marchmadness
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10 posted 2010-06-02 03:10 PM


I love everything about this, Margherita.
                    Ida

Margherita
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11 posted 2010-06-03 09:07 AM


How not to be fascinated by the immensity of Cosmos, dear Amaryllis, it is overwhelming and for our human brain not easily conceivable in its vastness! Thank you so much for your loving reply.

Dear Andrew, that's a beautiful haiku. I am happy that you felt inspired to write it! Thank you so much.

Some of its secrets we do know, but still so very few in comparison to what's there to know and understand! Thank you, dear Earl, for your kind reply.

Thank you, dear Jeff, for enjoying my thoughts and for the compliments. Physicists try to explain everything in terms of science, but there are things that lie far beyond in the spiritual sphere, I have no doubts about this. I stand in awe and wonder!

Dear Walter, thank you for your kind comment.

Dear ARH, how nice that you came in here and with such a loving reply. Thank you!

Dear Easy1, yes you are right, that is the Andromeda galaxy, totally awesome isn't it?! Thank you for the kind reply.

Thank you so much, dear Richy, for the glowing reply. The Universe no doubt can take our breath away with its splendor.

Dear John, you make me smile! It's the Andromeda Galaxy in all of its magnificence and you know what ... I believe we are all, Toe included   , magnificent expressions of the divine creativity.

I knew, dear Ida, that you would like this. Thank you so much for confirming it to me. I think we would gladly spend our time studying and gazing at the stars, you and me, if the earthly things would not distract us so much.  

Love and joy and divine awareness to all.
Margherita  

Lamar Cole
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12 posted 2010-06-04 10:12 PM


Very Nice.
LindsayP
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13 posted 2010-06-05 12:28 PM



My dear Margherita, a stunning picture with
words to match. I hope this goes through as

I tried several times to submit a response
for your great poem---Dancing in High Heels

but it wouldn't register. love and best wishes.

Lindsay

Bastet
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14 posted 2010-06-05 12:40 PM


A beautiful and perfect haiku. Don't know what more I can say. Bravo!
Misty Lilacs
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15 posted 2010-06-05 10:25 PM


Yippee! Loved this dear poetess! A great Haiku!


"I am using this cane as a fashion statement. It's the newest trend in accessories."

Margherita
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Eternity
16 posted 2010-06-06 01:18 PM


Thank you, dear Lamar, for the read and kind comment.

Dear Lindsay, I appreciate your efforts, thank you so much for the most loving reply!

Thank you, dear Bastet, I love this form and it's nice to hear that you enjoyed it.

Dear Marti, hugs to you for your joyous reply! I always appreciate and love your haikus too.

Love,
Margherita


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