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Fall Into You
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Fall Into You |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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I’ve been having thoughts lately that I need to feel your saving grace And once more look upon that holy place You say we’ve been there before And you know the emotions I’m feeling As you take me in hands of healing Loneliness can be such a reward For misery suffered one too many times Oh how your love can be such a crime Allow me this one brief rest From the hell in which I dwell Weave about me the darkest magic spell Reach out to me, I’ll fall into you Offer me arms unfolded again Like the night to the day, I will give in |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Spellbinding capture of the helplessness of love.. I especially liked the last line, such perfect simile. Well done |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
another passionate piece!!! |
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