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rachaelfuchsberger
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0 posted 2010-05-31 01:59 AM


Te estraño mi hermana
Te estraño mi amiga

Quiero verte
Quiero abrazarte

Te estraño mi amiga
Te estraño mi hermana

Quiero hablar contigo
Quiero reír contigo

Te estraño mi hermana
Te estraño mi amiga


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I miss you my sister
I miss you my friend

I want to see you
I want to hug you

I miss you my friend
I miss you my sister

I want to talk with you
I want to laugh with you

I miss you my sister
I miss you my friend


Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

© Copyright 2010 Rachael Fuchsberger - All Rights Reserved
Richy
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1 posted 2010-05-31 02:24 AM


Sad and sweet! I hope you and your sister reunite someday soon.

Richard

rachaelfuchsberger
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2 posted 2010-05-31 02:47 AM


That poem was actually written for several people. I hope to see all of them again someday.

Goddess grant me the serenity to accept the things that I cannot change, the courage to change the things I can and the wisdom to know the difference.

whisperingwalt
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3 posted 2010-05-31 10:13 AM


We always miss those that have meant something to us...its like when they go they take a piece of our heart and identity with them. It was very nice and heartfelt to read your poem and Spanish. Your feeling of the longing really came through. Que Dios te bendiga con la paz de su Hijo..ww
Margherita
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4 posted 2010-05-31 10:51 AM


Very lovely poem of longing. Enjoyed the Spanish version too.

Love,
Margherita

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