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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2010-05-30 04:40 AM


I was in first grade in 1951.
There was a war going on.
Once in a while
I would listen to the next door neighbor
read her husband's letters
to his daughters
before she took us all to school.
He was writing from Korea.
Poignant letters...
How he missed his home and family
and of the hardships of war.
Sometimes there was a touch of humor
in the letters.
Clearly an effort to spare his family
the harshest of realities.

We moved away before the war was over
and I have often wondered if he ever came home
or if his daughters remember those letters
as well as I do.
                        Ida Werrett

© Copyright 2010 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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1 posted 2010-05-30 10:46 AM


Very poignant. I reckon those daughters do remember.
whisperingwalt
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2 posted 2010-05-30 11:30 AM


It is the things that touch our hearts that we have a tendency to remember..ww
2islander2
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3 posted 2010-05-30 01:52 PM


thanks Ida for the poignant poem, may be on facebook you could find these people.

have a nice day

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2010-05-30 02:05 PM


I was only 6 years old and we  lived in that house for about a year, yann. I don't even remember their names, just the letters.
                                 Ida

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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5 posted 2010-05-30 05:46 PM


Beautiful, tender.. and very relevant to this weekend. Enjoyed your talent for engaging the reader so well.. nicely done     
secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2010-05-30 08:58 PM


very well penned 'slice of life' memory!


BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2010-05-30 09:30 PM


So many unfinished chapters in our lives, the people who passed through come to mind in such profound ways.

You make me wonder about so many people and places and times of my life.

Thanks for always sharing your wonderful thoughts, they are a comfort to me.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
8 posted 2010-05-30 09:34 PM


I think you touched a soft spot in everyone in this piece, my friend. Sure did with me, and brought back many forgotten thoughs and memories...

Thanks,

j.

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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Redlands,CA,USA
9 posted 2010-05-31 12:42 PM


I'm sure his words were written to any who would take the time to read and listen.  No matter the man's fate, you do his memory justice with this piece.
Bastet
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since 2010-05-07
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10 posted 2010-05-31 12:50 PM


A very subtle and poignant portrayal of a war situation. You have really said it all in a very poetic way. An inspiring read.
Margherita
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11 posted 2010-05-31 11:15 AM


Your precious memory brought us this inspired poem that speaks so powerfully of a situation that still exists around the world that longs for peace.

Love,
Margherita

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
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12 posted 2010-05-31 01:23 PM


Ida, most of the letters recieved, came as small copied letters as all were opened and photgraphed or something. When my grandson was in the Navy they were sending home
e-mails! I was amazed at the changes.My grandson  was on the Interprise.

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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13 posted 2010-05-31 03:55 PM


Ida,

   I really enjoyed your poem and reflecting on the emotions in the room at the time the letters were read.   You gave me a lot to think about and appreciate!  Thank you.   It's been good to read your poetry again.


misce  

Prasad Nataraj
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Bangalore,India
14 posted 2010-06-04 05:24 AM


War as done no good to anyone. Lovely poem Ida.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

kudanesh
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since 2007-12-01
Posts 135
Peterborough,England
15 posted 2010-06-04 10:36 AM


War is not a good thing but it stops more that what people think.... Hitler. that could not have been solved with out a was there are several more cases but. yes wars are not good but. some times you have to fight back.

violence never solves anything but it can help

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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Australia, Victoria
16 posted 2010-06-04 10:51 PM



Dear Ida that is a very poignant post my

dear, It touches the heart strings. love.

Lindsay

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2010-06-09 08:09 PM


Nice...James
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18 posted 2010-06-14 02:02 AM


Ida,

I wonder too.  Thank you for sharing - I love the stories of your poetry.

xoxox
A

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