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easy1
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0 posted 2010-05-30 12:07 PM



http://starchild.gsfc.nasa.gov/docs/StarChild/solar_system_level2/sun_image.html

Bubblous, balloominous,
Incinerous, contuminous,
In many ways voluminous,
the Sun and its X-rays.

Trailing on through shady dawns,
and whispers in reflecting ponds,
the X-ray Sun, the fiery beast,
in wavelengths that we know it least.

Only those with X-ray eyes
can see magnetos atomize,
and this old star that set tonight
returns tomorrow in "normal" light.

There's not much else that I can say,
except it's good we're far away.
But not too far, like out on Mars.
The life zone's narrow 'round these stars.  


© Copyright 2010 Mark C. - All Rights Reserved
Bastet
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1 posted 2010-05-30 12:53 PM



An original topic. Humorous and great fun too read.

Amaryllis
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2 posted 2010-05-30 01:32 AM


Enjoyed your word-play! Well done
Earl Brinkman
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3 posted 2010-06-17 03:04 AM


I may not have X-ray eyes but that can`t stop a fellow from loving a quirky poem.
bel1e
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4 posted 2010-06-17 06:56 AM


~~~enjoyed this ~*~

      

Chalmette Guy
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5 posted 2010-06-17 09:28 AM


This was cool and fun to read.
LindsayP
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6 posted 2010-06-18 10:33 PM



A very good poem Easy, much enjoyed

well done. Have a happy day.

Lindsay

Toerag
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7 posted 2010-06-19 09:44 AM


Easy for you to say. Loved the play on words and so descriptive. Nice write.
Amaryllis
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8 posted 2010-06-19 05:08 PM


Every now and then I have to stop by this fun poem and read the first three lines aloud..  whee!     You`re so clever, easy  
Best~Amaryllis

easy1
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9 posted 2010-06-19 06:37 PM


Thanks for the kind words, or as the Germans say, "donkey shines."

Amaryllis, Boom-boominous wouldn't do since that sort of sound doesn't travel through outer space.

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