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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2010-05-29 11:11 AM

Bones gets taken in.

He’s snatched
right off the corner
by the police.

They take him down
to the prescient,
for a little talk
with a sergeant Brown.

She a pretty lady officer,
and she talks nice to Bones.
Bones takes a liking to her.

“Bones, are you
listening to me Bones?”

“Yeah, I’m listening.”

“It’s “Yes,
I’m listening sergeant—
you got that Bones.”

“Yes. I’m listening sergeant.”

“We’ve been watching you Bones,
and we know what you’re up to.
We don’t like what we see.

If you keep it up,
we’re going to have to
send you away
to a very unpleasant place
for a very long time.

We don’t want to do that,
so we’re giving you a chance
to straighten your life out.

The Army needs you Bones.

You go sign up,
you’ll like it.

Three squares a day,
and a place to sleep.”

“Yeah,
okay,
thanks sergeant.”

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2010-05-29 11:31 AM

Hello Bobby, the contact between Bones and the army unveils authenticity, almost some complicity, two destinies that fit at the same time with a forced consent, I don't know if it right however the poem is very enjoyable to read. thanks for the good work.

yann

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

2 posted 2010-05-29 12:30 PM

Yo Bobby,
Why is everyone always picking on Bones.LOL
I enjoyed the read..felt like I was sitting there with Bones and getting the sales spiel to join the army..well done..ww

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2010-05-29 02:14 PM

If the Army helped our Bones become the man he is today, I am glad that he joined. Thank you, Bones, for serving.

Love,
Alison

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2010-05-29 07:55 PM

Thanks Yann,

I'm glad the poem worked for you.

Thanks for the kind words.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2010-05-29 07:57 PM

Thanks WW,

Well, that's the way it was with Bones. The Army was good for Bones.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2010-05-29 07:58 PM

Thanks dear Alison,

The Army was the best thing that ever happened for Bones.

He learned a great deal.

Love Bobby

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

7 posted 2010-05-30 07:50 AM

The direction you could take with this are unlimited. It could be quite fun. I hope to read more.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

8 posted 2010-05-30 12:34 PM

Thanks Earl,

Yes, Bones has loads of Army stories. I hope you enjoy them.

Bobby

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