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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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Southeastern USA

0 posted 2010-05-26 05:46 PM





Tawny the blue sky
turns, headed for the darkness
of a full moon night.

***

Abuse of power
is pernicious slavery.
Defend against it.

© Copyright 2010 Mark C. - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2010-05-27 03:46 AM


I love the two poems, the first one depaints gracefully an emotion in front of the sky, the second one more political....

regards

yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2010-05-27 04:58 PM


You did a good job here.

Love,
Margherita

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