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Zeigeist
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since 2009-12-09
Posts 311
Michigan

0 posted 2010-05-22 09:35 AM


Walking My Path

I have seen it.
It knows my name.
As my feet follow each other
through this path of life,
I have often asked it
to walk with me.

For many years at a time
I have felt its embrace,
felt its warmth in my life,
but it always leaves me in the end.

Now,
again I am alone.
No soft steps to mirror my own.
I will struggle with out it,
but I will make it.
I will keep moving forward,
keeping faith that it will
again find me here,

walking my path.

Zeitgeist

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2010-05-22 09:46 AM


I can relate to this Zeigeist

I have walked alone also but life soon catches up.


Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2010-05-22 03:55 PM


Beautiful and uplifting, as you trust your own power. Never ever we walk alone, but we might not always be aware of "it" ...

Love,
Margherita

easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
3 posted 2010-05-22 09:34 PM


"Blessed are the pure in heart, for they shall see God."
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2010-05-23 03:24 PM



As I read, I named "it" faith...the mind will fill what is void, but only faith will fill what is empty.

Good work.

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