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Namyh
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0 posted 2010-05-21 05:27 PM


6 Minute Football

The night was a bucket of blackness splashed on a canvas of stars,
homebound in my green Chevy pickup on a backroad emptied of cars.
I could see my houselight in the distance like a flashing, flickering, flame.
I gunned the engine, raced up the road for tonight's great Football game.

Upon stopping, I looked in my mirror and saw some reflections of light.
Coming up the road, it was only my buddies with pretzels and chips for the night.
We watched the game, talked and ate, laughing in our work-day duds.
With the keg on the table and the chips in the dip, we sucked down masses of suds.

The game was intense and rugged on a field of green, you see.
I wished and wanted to play there when something tugged me three.
Bill's eyes went wild! Frank threw up chips! Sam spewed beer suds on me!
I began dissolving, melting, merging into the game's TV.

Before I knew it, with ball in hand, I was running for the touchdown goal.
Monstrous brutes, frothing at the mouth, ran behind to stop me cold.
They were gaining, almost upon me. That's when my Fear kicked in.
I could hear my best buddies yelling and shouting for me to win.

I was lifted in the air and slammed to the ground
with a crunch and a crash not kind,
with my wind knocked out and waves of hurt
from the weight of the brutes on my spine.
But the cheers went out with a Victory roar
and I opened my eyes to find
6 minutes of Pro Football, I'll cherish,
'cause the ball was over the line.

Namyh


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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-05-22 07:19 AM


This is so very vivid, dear Namyh!

Love,
Margherita

Earl Brinkman
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2 posted 2010-05-22 07:47 AM


This was different from most of the poems on the site and being unique is always a good thing.  Enjoyed!
whisperingwalt
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3 posted 2010-05-22 11:57 AM


Really enjoyed this read...have experienced this feeling myself....well done!ww
Namyh
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4 posted 2010-05-22 08:11 PM


Margherita – I thought that was you in the stands shouting and screaming for me to win. Thanks. It helped a lot and I should be back on solid foods in two weeks. LOL. Glad you loved. Namyh
Namyh
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5 posted 2010-05-22 08:11 PM


Earl – Sometimes you have to step outside the box to write the different. It’s what we poets do to improve. So very happy this was unique for you. Thanks Earl. Namyh
Namyh
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6 posted 2010-05-22 08:12 PM


Ww – If you know the crunch and the crash, then you’ve walked the walk and can talk the talk. Thanks Ww for enjoying. Hope it brought back good memories of winning and just playing for fun. Namyh
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