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Open Poetry #46

The Best Part Of Me

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

0 posted 2010-05-21 04:47 AM

Love flows like a river.
Love falls like the rain.
The thought of you makes me shiver.
The touch of your lips makes me quiver.

Love smells sweet like a rose.
Love is deep like the sea.
Your love like leaves on a tree.
Is darling the best part of me.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2010-05-21 04:57 AM

beautiful poetry!

Lamar, it's 4 am where I am and I thought the world would be asleep so it's a pleasure to see you up and about

good night

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-05-21 08:44 AM

Lamar- What a sweet taste of love and romance here! My favorite flovors! ebm

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2010-05-21 11:10 AM

Your love is tangible! Very lovely romantic poem.

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2010-05-21 02:23 PM

Sweet it is~

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

5 posted 2010-05-21 05:12 PM

Lamar - Ain't Love grand! It's usually the best part of us all. Thanks for writing about it. Namyh

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