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Open Poetry #46

Drunk

srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

0 posted 2010-05-20 02:55 PM

Drunk

Get drunk my friend
on this very life
it gets better by age
rarer by the years
be a vintage bum
like a wino on the street
refuse to go home.

Live Life!

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

1 posted 2010-05-20 03:38 PM

Powerful and to the point. Your last line is a thinker. Good job! ebm

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2010-05-20 04:09 PM

Amen! Good piece!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2010-05-20 04:33 PM

srizah - yes, it does get better with age...

BC

SlowlyFallAway
Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 279
North Carolina

4 posted 2010-05-20 04:41 PM

inspirational.

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

5 posted 2010-05-20 05:02 PM

Now this I wouldn't mind getting drunk from, espcially with age when I get a little more older. Nice poem

Serge
New Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1

6 posted 2010-05-20 05:03 PM

hi srizah,

I like in particular the last 3 lines of your poem: they breathe freedom.

Cheers
Serge

srizah
Junior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

7 posted 2010-05-20 05:54 PM

Hi All,

Thank you all for your great comments.

~srizah~

Live Life!

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