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Open Poetry #46
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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2010-05-20 02:35 PM


Cool dark lake,
sun sparkle reflected.
Duck formations in
azure, white winged
bird clouds aloft.
Eyes closed,face
flushed warm by
sunstream, i listen.
Squabbling wildfowl, bursts
of splashing water.
Echoing pigeons, light
metallic jingles of
finches. Droning aircraft,
paper dry reeds.
Eyes open, feather
on water pirouetting
slowly. Early evening
easily spent, absorbed
gratefully, prelude to
nights dreaming act.

Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron.

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (05-21-2010 06:08 AM).]
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2010-05-20 04:10 PM

what a fine use of vocabulary in this vivid description! Loving it!
naturegirl
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since 2009-09-30
Posts 168
England
2 posted 2010-05-21 03:24 AM

Beautiful. I could be sitting there myself your words are so vivid. Thank you for sharing.
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