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Eusta B. Mae
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0 posted 2010-05-20 12:16 PM





Stranger things
Have happened
But I can’t remember when

I opened a dark door
And was blown away
On a kindred wind

How long
That door’d
Been there
Waiting
Is hard to say
All my life perhaps
Waiting
For that day

I would bite
The apple offered
When I came to stay


© Copyright 2010 Eusta B. Mae - All Rights Reserved
Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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Louisiana
1 posted 2010-05-20 12:32 PM


This is very deep and thought provoking. I can tell this has a lot personal resonance to you, and it may take a few more readings to grasp the meaning here.
But still, you never fail to capture the imagination.
Well done.

Eusta B. Mae
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2 posted 2010-05-20 12:53 PM


Thanks CG! ebm
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2010-05-20 04:32 PM


Eusta B. Mae - that door opened and something entered into your life, or something left. I like the words, and meaning of this write...

BC

whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
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4 posted 2010-05-21 03:13 AM


enjoyed the read..good job EBM...ww
Eusta B. Mae
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5 posted 2010-05-21 08:52 AM


BC- thanks for the read, glad you're liking my words
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Walt- thanks for checking me out, glad i didn't disapoint-ebm

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2010-05-22 09:26 AM


yep, I opened a door like that also...walked in and stayed for about 13 years. Now I only make a phone call once a month or so.

Doors are everywhere, and yes I do believe they are there our whole lives.

Good write here, much enjoyed

Larry C
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7 posted 2010-05-31 07:20 PM


Timing, it's still everthing.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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