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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-05-17 06:53 PM

Early In the Morning

If I could spend
my life with you
would that be
my satisfaction,
kissing your lips
into the evenings,
being the recipient
of your reactions.
Would you laugh and smile
and tell me to keep going?
Would love find us wrapped
in each others arms
early in the morning?

JamesLee
16May
2010

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

1 posted 2010-05-18 02:55 AM

James you smoothie you...good job..very romantic..ww

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2010-05-18 06:52 PM

Love your thoughts, dear James. Tender early mornings are such a gift ... or would be ...

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2010-05-18 10:10 PM

James - early in the morning is a good thing...

BC

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2010-05-19 04:22 AM

always beautiful, always new about loving someone...Thanks for the poem.

yann

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2010-05-31 07:49 PM

Nicely done.

naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

6 posted 2010-06-01 03:23 PM

lovely poem thanks for sharing

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

7 posted 2010-06-04 05:32 AM

Very romantic indeed James.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

8 posted 2010-06-04 11:42 PM

It certainly sounds well James,

I hope it comes to fruition. take care.

Lindsay

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

9 posted 2010-06-05 12:35 PM

I do wish you well on that. It's a nice poem.

***

"When I wake up in the morning
she makes me feel so good,
bringin' me a shot of whiskey
and a little bit of lovin', too."

- Leslie West, Never In My Life (from Mountain's album Climbing)

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

10 posted 2010-06-05 12:49 PM

A very romantic love poem. Reminds me of a holiday I spent in Hawaii. Yes, early morning is one of the most beautiful hours in those islands. Thanks for the happy memories.

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

11 posted 2010-06-08 05:52 PM

Nice.

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

12 posted 2010-06-08 09:40 PM

I read this as once the actual act of love making is completed the two lovers are still bond by an emotional commitment that transcends any physical aspect of the relationship since they wake up in each other`s arms in the morning.

Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

13 posted 2010-06-09 12:38 PM

It`s very heartfelt and genuine, softly stated.. nice write

.
~Amaryllis

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