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... just to be love |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 ... to just be love Thoughts of you are dancing light in this gloomy day as raindrops in my hair replay the touch of your fingertips. My steps acquire the rhythm of buoyancy while you shine in me and I bask in your brilliance. Smiles of love travel as lightning through the air causing the collision of our hearts within water’s seductive play. This moment reverberates in soul space where distance shrinks to zero, as we fall into each other to just be ... ... to just be love. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Margherita...."to just be love"...can't think of a better place to be. What a lovely way to say it. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Dearest Lady...you make beautiful music, which is far beyond lovers...it surrounds our whole being connecting us to everything...wonderful write...thank you Lee J. P.S. It took a lot of courage to write about my poem...I've been afraid to tell anyone about it...thank you so much for telling me of your son's memories... Hugs |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Delicious...James |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Margherita..love the picture and the poem..very elegant read.ww |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Hi Margherita, So glad you're back and with such a lovely poem. Many of the poets haven't been on the site much lately. I haven't been very productive myself as I have had a lot going on in the past couple of months. Ida |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Margherita, Just dropped in for a moment for a couple of reads and I found your name and catchy title. I've read many of your poems, but I think this is my new favorite. It's still hard for me to believe Englishis your third language, as this just seemed to flow so effortlessly. Truly beautiful! It's good to read your work again! hugs, misce' |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...so good to see you back...your love poems are golden!! |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
That first stanza is magic!!!!! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Margherita, the ending is just wonderful, how sweet are your words and enjoyable to share, You sum up the essential, just to be love... have a nice day yann |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Martie, thank you so much for your loving comment. You know what it means to be just love. Thank you, dear LeeJ, for your beautiful reply. I know the kind of courage you speak of. There is an awakening taking place to the wonders of life, but there will still be many who won't believe without experiencing themselves this kind of mysteries. Please go on and dare to spread your truth. Dear James, thank you for your sweet appreciation. Dear Walter, thank you for your kind words, also on my poems on the Spiritual Journey forum. I am very happy too, dear Ida, that you came back. Though we do love Pip sometimes life has other plans for us. I had the joy of a visit of my daughter with her precious trio of grandsons. I am looking forward to your inspired poems to appear here soon! Thank you so much, dear Miscé, you warm my heart with your comment. It's good to know you peek in often and for you too I hope you will post soon. There are some who say it is impossible to write poetry in a foreign language. There may be some truth in this affirmation, but your compliments encourage me. Of course I check the words when I have a doubt, but it might not always be enough. Dear DS, it's my favorite kind of poetry  , thank you so much for reading and commenting so lovingly.Thank you, dear Earl, you are always generous with your comments. Dear Yann, thank you so much, your reply brings joy. Love and inspiration to all of you. Margherita |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
 You said it so sweetly. I particularly enjoy the play between water and love… two substances we can’t live a life without. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (05-15-2010 09:57 PM).] |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very lovely and tender poem. |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
A very touching love poem. Beautiful imagery and choice of words. And the picture is an extra bonus. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You color love beautifully, Margherita~ A delight, as always~ |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
I don't say it often enought, but only your heart itself can exceed the warmth in your words. Jeff |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - dear one, you are most lovely with your thoughts. Great write... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My dear Poet friends, I enjoyed your loving replies so much. Thank you! Love, Margherita |
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