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whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

0 posted 2010-05-13 02:11 PM




Smitten

In the twilight of thought
My voice howls for you
Like a wolf in the wild
Yearning for your smile
If this world should end
My love will not bend
The skies have no limit
When we are together
With every gaze and hug
We experience eternity
You are the light
In the window
You are my strength
When I feel weak
And my heart's refuge
When my world feels...
...strange

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Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
Posts 903

1 posted 2010-05-13 02:20 PM


"In the twilight of thought
My voice howls for you
Like a wolf in the wild
Yearning for your smile" love the imagery here, very nice. ebm

whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada
2 posted 2010-05-13 02:23 PM


Ebm,
Thought you might enjoy this one.ww

Bastet
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since 2010-05-07
Posts 246

3 posted 2010-05-14 12:13 PM



You seem to be very good at love poems. I hope your lover appreciates your talent.


whisperingwalt
Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada
4 posted 2010-05-14 12:54 PM


Bastet,
     You know we all have a romantic side...this is one the many poems I courted my wife with...she still really treasures them all.ww

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2010-05-14 07:29 PM


is it any wonder she treasures them...
you are both very fortunate...
very beautifully written...


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