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Open Poetry #46

Whisper My Name

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

0 posted 2010-05-12 10:04 PM

Whisper My Name

I feel you deep within my soul,
And crave the passion it speaks of,
The obsession, the scent of love,
The softness of skin on skin,
Intertwined with the strength of a man,
And the tenderness of a woman's love,
As she takes him,
The mingling of emotions,
The fire of passion drives them,
To unbridled realms of ecstasy.

Lay with me,
Take me, feel me, kiss me,
Touch me,
I loose my mind, I can't breath,
Yet there, the smile in your eyes,

They speak to me, telling me:

'Yes'

You whisper my name,

And it is right.

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-05-15 02:14 PM

Very passionate whisper, dear Tracey!

Love,
Margherita

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2010-05-16 04:49 PM

So very passionate... and so very beautiful. *S* Sometimes one word says everything!!

Dadygoose
Member

since 2010-01-01

Posts 162
A Communist country

3 posted 2010-05-16 09:21 PM

Ohhhhh, Tracey. Dear, dear Tracey.
How explicit, how poignant, how you help me dream.
And, more than that, dream that is actually based on an actual woman’s desire.
Dear, dear Tracey. I just can’t tell you how your poem makes me feel.
Thank you
gGotta eat dinner, now.
:---so very many hugs---)
From the bottom of my heart.
Dadygoose aka Jaime

Hey, nobody's human!

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

4 posted 2010-05-17 03:02 AM

very beautiful ..... found myself going there in my mind ..........

~~~kingsangel~~~

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

5 posted 2010-05-17 04:49 PM

Very Nice.

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