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Mother Earth |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Mother Earth show my worth Hold me in your embrace And crush me under the weight Of your love, my fate I need to know if I lived in vain For what else is there? But to allow myself to die this way And return forlorn to the air Long have I lived like this Eternal, the state I am in My suffocation is my bliss This knowledge is my sin I need only to lie on your ground And let you wrap me up In wind with arms all around Until I choose to give up Oh Mother, please come and smother Take me, your long lost lover And crush me under the weight Of love that feels like hate |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Woe dude! Heavy duty lamenting and tuggin' at the ole heart strings. Been there felt that before. YOU NEED A HUG! ebm |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you ebm. Am also in a hug giving mood too. lol Thanks for reading. |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
A nice coupling to Mother's Day, a different take on Mom. You described very well the feelings of being nurtured, C.Guy! Jf |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very captivating work! Love, Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
incredibly brilliant...enjoyed.... especially this.. Long have I lived like this Eternal, the state I am in My suffocation is my bliss This knowledge is my sin |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Another fine piece of work, Chalmette Guy. ida |
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