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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2010-05-12 07:25 AM



perhaps it was what you did with your mind
toying it in your fingers like is was sticky
and standing there with nearly nothing on
except all of your shimmering ladylike

using that doorway in daylight like mirrors
a fornucopia of sweet sounding suggestions
that never even dripped from your lips
but you did spread them around on smiles

waiting to see how many words I had available
and if a pig and a samurai could be coexistent
when the dictionary was their common trough
and bending their syllable middles their quest

you were soft in alabaster, as if nearly fragile
but you did mention how you changed when touched
and how being handled made you nearly always manly
but if I didn't mind a good fight on occasion

it might be fun to try on each others arguments


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daark (sloop ms p)


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Eusta B. Mae
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1 posted 2010-05-12 08:27 AM


DS only you could make Webster's sound like a hot dicktionary.  ebm
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2010-05-12 11:16 AM


ms EBM..thanks ms
BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2010-05-13 12:26 PM


using that doorway in daylight like mirrors

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Oh that's such a pretty reflection!!!

Way cool, dude~

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2010-05-13 01:17 PM


babyblue...thanks doll..I appreciate you
Sunshine
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5 posted 2010-05-13 04:18 PM


What imagery...watching a pig hoof through
a dictionary...or at best, tapping keys to
dictionary.com...



Me like...all of it.

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2010-05-13 04:42 PM


ms sun...was referring to or interfering with the chauvinistic vs the disciplined warrior in this exercise...not sure who won/wins.thanks babe
Sunshine
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7 posted 2010-05-13 09:16 PM


That being said...

I only wrote of a thought of one stanza...

you haven't read the rest of my mind, just yet.  


Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2010-05-14 05:44 AM


ms sun...I will study it for hours...(your mind), thanks lady
Margherita
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9 posted 2010-05-15 01:59 PM


quote:
but you did spread them around on smiles



Every line is a hit and the above is my favorite.

Terrific.

Love,
Margherita

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