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Open Poetry #46

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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2010-05-08 03:37 AM

this most
blessed of curses
            most cursed
of blessings
                 this mirror
         hourglassed
                     the proof is in
                          the pudding
            there is not
thousands of questions
         with
       one
    answer
                    there is
                       one question
          with thousands of
            answers

hence
           disproving them all

               the only
       slave on earth
              that can be an
               enslaver

          bow to
    your true
      God

              the Bulge
           on your
    Forehead

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

1 posted 2010-05-08 09:50 AM

love the poem, the space and the ideas, thanks for sharing.

yann

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 2010-05-08 11:56 AM

I took several reads of this one... I enjoyed the thought and form.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2010-05-08 12:19 PM

brillant, enjoyed the read

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2010-05-10 03:18 AM

You...

look...

familiar.

*smile*

And I shake my head and summon my gods. How do I bow to my head. You must show me this trick one day.

The paradox of that IS the brilliance of your write. Absolutely perfect.

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