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LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
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Australia, Victoria

0 posted 2010-05-07 11:27 PM



     THE GREAT WIDE BLUE UP YONDER

Trapped in a city of of unclean air,
I gaze  around with a vacant stare
And wonder where I made that erroneous turn,
For many a day it’s clouded in smog,
The fumes and the dust the sinuses clog,
Once more for those wide open spaces I yearn.

For once again I would like to wander
Beneath the great wide blue up yonder,
Where wild flower buds are born to blush unseen,
Where their fragrance pure is wasted
Like vintage wine that’s never tasted,
Then drifts away in those far flung glades of green.

To see an old man kangaroo
As he leaves his tracks in the morning dew,
Slowly raise himself to his full majestic height,
His senses quickly become intense
As a dingo shows at the boundary fence,
Then stealthily steals away in the gathering light.

To rest in the shade on a river’s bank
Where the grass grows green and lush and rank,
And the reeds all gently murmur in the breeze,
Watching swallows that duty bring
To catch insects upon the wing,
Their nestling’s hunger shortly to appease.

As the sun at it’s meridian shines
And activity in the bush declines,
Solace and solitude quietly paves the way,
But as the afternoon wears on
The heat of sun is gradually gone,
Towards the closing of another perfect day.

At twilight, half an hour ‘fore dark,
A ring- barked redgum standing stark
Is immersed suddenly in a swirling cloud of white,
A screeching crowd of cockatoos
For silence who at first refuse,
Then slowly settle down for the coming night.

Then as the dark it’s talons curl,
The nocturnal birds their wings unfurl,
Then a golden glow appears on horizons far,
Forth comes a softly tranquil moon
As frogs and crickets call in tune
Interrupted by the call of some lone nightjar.

The bush and plains it’s magic spun
I know it’s not for everyone’
But to me it’s an untold paradise
For city folk can never see
The pleasure bush-lands bring to me
Or appreciate the things that make it nice.

Lindsay  




© Copyright 2010 Lindsay P Wilson - All Rights Reserved
whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29
Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada
1 posted 2010-05-08 01:40 AM


Lindsay,
      as men we yearn for the open spaces and the adventure...I can relate the wanting to be out of the city and being where life truly lives...well written..good rhymes and great mental imagery.

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
2 posted 2010-05-10 09:12 PM



Thank you Walt for your kind response,

I'm so pleaed that you enjoyed the post and can relate to it. Take care.

Lindsay

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
3 posted 2010-05-12 11:26 PM


I have heard about the bush from my Aussie friends but I have never had such a complete description.  Thank you.
Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01
Posts 274

4 posted 2010-05-12 11:57 PM


Sounds nice.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2010-05-17 06:44 PM


A pleasure to read...James
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2010-05-18 10:17 AM


living once in the city/beach-town, and now here in the middle of cows and creeks and gardens, I sure appreciate this write dear Lindsay.

Have you ever thought about publishing? I think you'd do very well!


threadbear
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since 2008-07-10
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Indy
7 posted 2010-05-18 02:25 PM


beautifully rendered
in Oz panaramas
You have my writing respect, Lindsay,
Jeff

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
8 posted 2010-05-18 07:00 PM


quote:
Where wild flower buds are born to blush unseen



Blessed are the eyes which see this beauty, dear Lindsay.

Wonderful longing for Nature, I experience this too for my Swiss mountains ...

Love,
Margherita

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
9 posted 2010-05-18 10:16 PM


LindsayP - anytime you would like to go to this place let me know. I'll meet you...

BC

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